Interesting. Not a poem, I think. Also, despite a positive apparent intent, some unfortunate duality in some of the words that could unfortunately reinforce the demeaning or reviling of victims.

Not sure it comes even close to your average, let alone your best, Harry. However, I accept that this view may result from my own failure to understand or misperception. I comment on what's written, not on you.

Roger Hawcroft
Roger Hawcroft

Written by Roger Hawcroft

Expat Tyke in Australia. Dismayed & depressed at World conflict/poverty/disadvantage/hatred. Buoyed by music, art, literature, nature, animals & birds.

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